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Good art,
Horrible animation,
Amazing story!

Nice animation but just not very interesting. No intelligent or even vaguely humourous addition. Next time make it more unique, and your own spin. Something more than dynamic music and pointless explosions. I will give you an extra half for the "Shut up, Toad!" line. That was funny and unexpected.

Between your first step and your final step, I think I might love you guys.

JackSquatJB responds:

Guy* =P

So apparently writing "Just baaaad" didn't cut it with the admin. Here's some constructive critisism. First issue, the audio was horribly put together. You could really feel the chopping and pasting of the various effects. You might wanna work on that. Especially the end BWAAAAH!! That really took me out of the whole animation. Your pacing was a bit problemactic as well. There was too much tension build up for what happened. The explosion animation as well, coming from a shell just felt a little forced. Finally the Luigi reveal was long and really anticlimactic. I know you're riding on the whole "Luigi Death Stare" thing but it's being done to death. The only thing that keeps it interesting is the little twists that are in each animation e.g. Luigi actually doing a drive by to gangster music. You might want to work on your humour. However, on a positive note, I quite like your artstyle, drawings and animation (hence the 1 star). You would do well in a colab with someone who knows pacing and audio production.

You're just briliant bro. You're just brilliant.

danmarkowitz responds:

Thanks!

Just funny. Made me actually laugh out loud. 5/5

Noice!! Not the typical ending. I like.

WTF just happened!? 5 stars for shock factor!

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